Friday 2 August 2019

willow the honey bee

AO Integrate sources of information, processes, and strategies with developing confidence to identify, form, and express ideas I am learning to include visual information in my writing including images, graphs and charts. I am learning to revise and rework my writing for clarity, impact and purpose. I am learning to support my main ideas with important details.

 willow the honey bee Hi my name is wilo the honey bee I live in a hive like many honey bees The I am the smartest one So I decided to go away from the hive because some humans destroyed it. So I am off on a search to find out who done it. On my gorney I find a swarm of wasps I ask them if their village got destroyed like mine they say that their Queen got killed but then I said why is your Queen their then one wasp said she must have survived so you did not get attacked by HUMANS! yes no humans see there come at us FLY i’ll sting them NO they just hurt you GO AWAY humans!!. I’m glad that's over bye wasps nice meeting you. A While after that i’m in a city full of humans so I flew for a little bit and I found myself in a beautiful garden with millions of flowers and fish in ponds it was amazing and horrible sight of a human squashing a bug so I go up and sting that horrible human after that I feel good but my stinger does not. Then I see a herd of honey bees I go over and I recognise them I say mum dad is that you yep we sure are I thought you got killed with the others no we where just fakeing after the human went we saw that you were gone so we went and look for you and here you are. The end.

1 comment:

  1. wow Danica! I love this bee post, i think its beautiful. i cant wait to see more of these post! hey maybe you can send me some tips! other than tat i think nothing needs fixing in my eyes, so yeah, from Paparore school Charlize bye

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